I see great promise in this visual novel! I'm eagerly anticipating its release on Android. Perhaps, in the future, you might want to consider creating a Discord server. It could really enhance the vibrancy of your visual novel community. Only if you can, it can be difficult to manage so many things so no pressure it's only a suggestion. 😅

good luck with future endeavors.

Sincerely

Ray🖤😋

In terms of what I'm hoping to see more of in the future.  I'm hoping there will be more story-lines of one on one interactions with the characters the protagonist shows the most interest in.  I know that can lead to more writing because you need to basically write for each branch, but I think you'll get more people interested in the game when they get the option to more closely talk to the character they like the most. 

I think MC's name should be open to change. Also MC must meet all the three characters during the party or he will not understand why the tanuki is talking about people he doesn't know on the following day. 

Like the new art, story and characters, even has a ending if decided to leave instead nice 

Needs way more save files. 

Continuity errors,  later Nathan will talk about the other characters despite not meeting them first at the dance club in the beginning. Also when choosing which of the 3 to first speak to, it shows their names. Nathan doesnt know them yet so wouldnt know their names lol. Maybe give general descriptions of the 3 characters before choosing like:

"Smug Horse" 

"Buff Rhino"

"Mellow Walrus"